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1.
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interested in creating children's books.
Right now, the very first episode is up, and it's a
doozy. Join me for an exclusive chat with Karen
Robertson, author of Treasure Kai and the Lost
Gold of Shark Island and creator of an
amazing eBook
called Author's Guide to
Book Apps.
Karen has a great story: about a year ago,
she decided to create an iPad app for her
book. She's a self-described "total
non-techie", but she taught herself how to do
everything. Her journey turned out to be more
fun and less expensive than she imagined. Now
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Apps are super-hot right now and can offer exposure
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In our chat, Karen shares exactly what apps are and
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fact, you can do it.

Go check out the show at http://Write4Kids.tv
Karen has a free report about creating apps at
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One more thing: Karen has
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Updaters. Scroll down to item #7 to read
Why Book Apps are a Huge Opportunity for Kid’s
Writers... and How You can Create one Even if You
Don’t Have a “Technical” Bone in your
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3.
Here's
an Idea to Borrow: Let Your Readers
Create Their Own
Books
I've been
harping on the notion that the book industry is
going through exactly what the music industry did
10 years ago. The good news there is that we can
avoid their mistakes.
The even
better news is that we can borrow some ideas from
music's more inventive artists about how to deal
with the new digital reality.
Here's one I
really like:
http://lefsetz.com/wordpress/index.php/archives/2011/06/03/from-ricky-wilson-of-the-kaiser-chiefs/
Basically,
the band recorded 20 tracks and lets fans create
their own CD -- and their own unique artwork --
by picking their favorite 10 songs. Neat idea,
and something
that can be copied by authors with either short
story anthologies or "create your own adventure"
stories.
Read the
piece -- it's well worth your time. And
then, visit the band's
website to fiddle around with the
technology -- it's really, really cool and would
fit wonderfully on an author's site.
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6.
Writing Picture Books
101
Many
newcomers believe it's simple to write picture
books, but it actually requires a lot of skill to
pack a story into a few words. If your dreams
include writing a picture book, here are some
tips to consider before you begin:
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Keep
it simple. You should be able to sum
up the plot of your picture book in three
sentences. Not every detail, of course, but the
broad strokes. Create one sentences to capture
the beginning (naming your main character and
the problem or conflict he’ll face in the
story), one for the middle (describing the gist
of the efforts your character makes to solve
his problem), and one for the end (how he
finally resolves the conflict and reaches his
goal). If three sentences doesn’t capture the
essence of your plot, then it’s probably too
complex for a picture book.
Note: You’re
concerned here on plot (the action of the story),
rather than theme (the underlying message). Don’t
get into describing theme while you’re
summarizing your plot. The theme shouldn’t even
be an issue at this point. You want to construct
the story so the character’s actions, and how he
transforms because of those actions, presents a
lesson to your readers.
-
Think
in pictures. The term “picture books”
says it all: the illustrations are equally as
important as the words. The average picture
book is 32 pages long, with about four pages of
front matter (title page, copyright page, etc.)
So you have 28 pages of text and illustration.
If you aim for 1000 words to tell your story
(the average length of picture book text), that
gives you about 36 words per page (some pages
will have more words, some less, depending on
the pacing of your story). While you don’t want
to obsess over precise word counts when you’re
writing early drafts of your manuscript, do
keep in mind that every page of your book needs
to inspire a different illustration. So count
out 36 words from your manuscript and note how
large a chunk of text that is on the page.
That’s about how many words you can devote to
each illustration. After that, your characters
have to do something— move around, change
locations— so the illustrator will have a new
picture to draw.
One way to
think visually is to convey the character’s
problem, and her efforts to solve that problem,
in concrete, visual terms. If your character is
having trouble memorizing facts for school, that
all takes place inside her head. But if she’s
embarrassed because she can’t swim, then her
attempts to learn are easily illustrated.
Note: Some
illustrations will span two facing pages, called
a two-page spread. In this case, you’ll have
about 70 words for that one illustration. But
picture books are a mix of single page
illustrations and two-page spreads, so keep the
action moving at a good pace.
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Maintain
a childlike outlook. Picture book
characters can be children, adults, animals or
fantasy characters. But all main characters
must embody the sensibilities of a child
between the ages of 4-8. As a result, the
problem your characters faces needs to be
relevant and important to your target audience.
The way your character tackles that problem
must fit with the way a child would tackle it.
Don’t create an adult main character just so
you can impose some adult wisdom on your
readers. Grown-up characters using the
emotional, illogical and sometimes messy coping
strategies of children can be a very effective,
and funny, storytelling technique. Above all,
the character must be the one to solve the
problem, using methods that are accessible to
children. If readers see themselves in your
main character, then they’ll understand the
underlying message of your story.
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7.
Why Book Apps are a Huge
Opportunity for Kid’s Writers... and How
You can Create one Even if You Don’t Have a
“Technical” Bone in your
Body!
by Karen Robertson, author of
"Author's Guide to Book
Apps"
What if you
could:
-Deliver your
story to a global market quickly and
easily
-With no
inventory to manage
-While keeping
your rights
-At
a lower cost than printing a book
-And at a
higher profit?
You
can, by creating a book app.
So
what’s a book app? Think of it as an “eBook on
steroids.” It’s a book that runs on a mobile device
like the iPad, iPhone and iPod Touch. (See video at
www.treasurekai.com). This market is exploding in
growth, and it needs good content.
I’m
a children’s author who recently turned my book
into an app. Here’s why…
It
was June 2010 and I was just about to reprint a
small quantity of my children’s book, at great
cost, for a limited market, when I saw a book app
on the iPad for the first time. I knew I’d just
seen a way to take my passion for interactive
reading to a whole new level, plus a way to reach a
global market without the cost and hassles of
inventory.
But
not having a ‘technical’ bone in my body, I had no
idea how to do it. I worked with a friend and
together we found a developer and produced a book
app that is now getting rave reviews.
As
soon as I launched the app, other authors and
writers started asking me how I did what I’ve done.
After writing a few articles and speaking on the
topic, I realized I had a lot to share with other
writers. So I decided to write the book I wish I
would have had before I’d gotten
started.
Here’s a brief
Q&A for some of the more frequently asked
questions I hear.
Q: Why the book
app is the biggest opportunity writers have had in
decades?
A:
Because in the Apple market alone, there are nearly
200 million devices in market and the average
number of apps downloaded per device is 60. The
number of iPads sold in 2010 was 5x higher than
analysts had predicted (nearly 15
million).
Q. Could my
book be made into a book app?
A:
If your book is illustrated and has the potential
to be accompanied by music, be narrated and have
interactive elements like little animations or
touch-triggered sounds, then it is.
Q: How do I get
an app developed?
A:
You’ll need an app developer (think “programmer”).
Luckily, there are now small companies popping up
that specialize in creating book apps. Or you can
source your own via networking or online freelance
websites.
Q: What are the
pitfalls to avoid?
A:
You need to make sure you have a tight brief when
you start working with your developer and you need
to make sure you’ve negotiated updates to the app
after it’s released, so that the app keeps working
even as Apple updates its software and releases new
devices over time.
I’ve been so
excited about the results I’ve had so far.
I’ve…
-Sold book apps
to people in over 20 countries in our first 3
months
-Produced an
app in less than a third of the time it took to
produce my book
-Have no limit
to how many book apps I can sell
-I’ve kept my
rights
-Production was
far cheaper than my printed book
-And I keep 70%
of the revenue from book app sales because Apple
takes 30%.
If
you’d like to know more, simply visit
http://bit.ly/apps4kids to
download a free report, “The Top 5 Things you MUST
know before Creating a Book App for Kids” or check
out my eBook, “Author’s Guide to Book
Apps.”
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2011
Children's
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